There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter -describe the problems -explain how these problems are affecting the public -suggest some changes that could be made.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are well. I am a permanent resident of the Heping Square
area
. I am writing
this
letter to complain about the issues with public transport in my
area
. The major problem with buses in my
area
is that the timetable setting of the
bus
is not reasonable. All the buses in my
area
stop operating after 8:00pm, which is not friendly as most people living in my
area
are young people and some of them complete their work after 8:00pm,
however
, there is no
bus
available for them to go home. To resolve
this
issue, I strongly recommend that the
last
bus
arrive in my
area
should be extended to 10:00pm. I understand that the passengers after 8:00pm are not as many as before the time, and
thus
you can reduce the frequency of
bus
in the
last
two hours.
Therefore
, it will solve the difficulty of the public nearby without bringing operation pressure to the transportation corporation. In the end, I hope you and your team can treat
this
problem as your priority. Your response to me within two weeks will be highly appreciated. Thank you and Regards
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task response
Ensure to directly address the three points mentioned in the task question (problems, impact, and suggestions).
cohesion
The greeting and closing need to be more formal as this is a formal letter to the manager of the transport company.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to avoid repetition and enhance the overall quality of writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to ensure more complex and accurate language use.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plaguing
  • delays
  • frustration
  • inconvenience
  • productivity
  • rely on
  • daily commute
  • overall
  • condition
  • deteriorated
  • overcrowded
  • seating arrangements
  • compromises
  • safety
  • comfort
  • impacts
  • hygienic
  • maintenance
  • unpleasant
  • alternative
  • modes of transportation
  • congestion
  • pollution
  • fuel consumption
  • proposed
  • infrastructure
  • upgrading
  • expanding
  • cater to
  • growing population
  • focus on
  • regular maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • hire
  • train
  • customer service
  • overcrowding
  • expectations
  • managing
  • minimizing
  • appropriate action
  • reliable
  • efficient
  • sustainable
  • benefits
  • entire community
  • Thank you for your attention to this matter.
  • Yours faithfully
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