The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021

The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021
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The line chart exhibits the average monetary
value
of three precious metals during the period of 2013 to 2021. Altogether, both gold and platinum started at the same closing
price
at the beginning of the chart meanwhile palladium started at a lower
price
, despite
of
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the starting
value
doesn´t seem to correlate with their growth or decline in
value
at the end
of the graph. During the period of 2013 to 2016 the
price
per
ounce
of palladium seemed to stay at around 750
dollars
per
ounce
until it saw an exponential increase in
price
from the year 2016 to 2021 where it peaked circling the
value
of 2400
dollars
per
ounce
reaching the highest
price
of all the metals.
Although
during the period of 2013 to 2015 gold and platinum faced a decline in
value
from around 1500
dollars
per
ounce
to around 1000
dollars
per
ounce
. It was not until the beginning of 2015 that gold´s
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