The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
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The pie charts above depict the percentage of volunteers by type of organization between 2008 and 2014. There are six groups: environmental, art, sport,
health
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care
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, educational, and others. In 2008, educational was the sort of organization with more volunteers,
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health
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care
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was the less group; at the second position, it has shown environmental activities. In 2014, environmental was in the first place,
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care
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remained in the minor group; in the second position, the graph shows sports activities. Comparing both years, the type of volunteer work that increased more was the sports organizations (10%).
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, the type that decreased more was educational organizations (7%).
Health
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care
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and art remained almost at the same percentage, with few variations among the years analysed. It is not possible to know if the
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of people who work for non-governmental jobs increased or decreased in
this
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period because it only illustrates the percentage.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words health, care with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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