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Nowadays, technology plays a major role in our lives. Some people think it have a positive impact for students, but others concern it as a detrimental item for study. Compare two sides opinion.

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Nowadays,
technology
 plays a major role in our lives. Some people
regards
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 it as a vital educational tool for
students
, but others concern it as a detrimental item for the study. Personally, I think there are benefits and shortages for both sides, and the following content will list the reasons. Modern
technology
 enhances the efficiency
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for
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 people to absorb knowledge.
For example
,
online
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the online
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 database can provide more data than a substantial one,
furthermore
, every member of the library can obtain the information on the library’s website. In
library
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,
students
 spend plenty of time
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looking for the information they want,
in contrast
, searching on
net
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 is much
more
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faster,
it
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 only
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 less than one minute to wait for the
searching
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 results to pop up.
Nevertheless
, the addiction
of
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 electronic
device
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devices
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 is
also
 a crucial issue
to
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 a student. In recent years, video games and short-time video
app
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 are popular on the internet. These items distract teenagers from learning,
for example
, several
students
 use electronics more than five hours a day or even more, but they spend most of the time on YouTube,
Tik-tok
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TikTok
 and Facebook,
as a result
, these affect their academic
grade
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. In general,
technology
assist
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 people to easily obtain information, but several entertaining functions severely affect
students
’ learning. In my notion,
technology
 doesn’t cause these problems, human does,
hence
,
students
 should find
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 balance when they are managing their study.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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