This illustration shows us the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above the below the surface of the Earth.

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cycle, which is the continuous movement of
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on, above the below the surface of the Earth.
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photosynthesis. The first step of photosynthesis starts in
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the
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contributes about 60% of total
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vapour in
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condensing
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, it turns into a cloud. We all know that in certain seasons the
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or rain. Now
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drops into the depressions
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and replenishes lakes, and if the
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on the mountain peak, the
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is gonna creating to snow, because in mountain high ground the temperature is low. Other
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or the
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after melting the snow,
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through the inside of the mountain straight into the
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through the earth and different types of minerals,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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