The chart presents changes in the percentage of students who recieved higher education in different Canadian provinces in 5 years between 2001 and 2006.

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The chart presents changes in the percentage of students who

recieved

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higher education in different Canadian provinces in 5 years between 2001 and 2006. In 2001, the percentage was limited, it went from 3% in

Onatario

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Ontario

to 7% in New Brunswick. Novascotia with

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6,5% was second in

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of students. As 4 years

past

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by, almost all the provinces had gone up,

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there were

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exceptions

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as Quebec and Alberta which had risen

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only 4%. By 2006, some universities went through a growth in the share of international students. Especially

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shown in

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of New Brunswick where the numbers had increased from 7% to 12%.

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the one who got the most progress was British Columbia. Over a period of 5 years, the shown Canadian provinces have gone through contrasting in

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between

changes.

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, New Brunswick continued to be

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place with the highest percentage.

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The chart presents changes in the percentage of students who recieved higher education in different Canadian provinces in 5 years between 2001 and 2006.

The gap between rich and poor is growing. What problems does this create? What can be done to tackle this.

In some countries, birth rates are falling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problem might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?

4.Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s is bad for them. Why is this? What is an effective way to improve people’s healthy eating habits?

39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.