The given illustration shows the process of brick manufacturing.

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The given illustration shows the process of brick manufacturing. First of all, a digger excavates clay from the ground. After that, it is sent to a roller where it goes through a metal grid to keep unwanted slag and send
now
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pure sand
further
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down.
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a mined product is cut into bricks by using a wire cutter or the acquired mixture is poured
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mould which forms bricks. Following that, bricks are dried
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particular
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a particular
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oven for 1 to 2 days and
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it is cooled in
cooling
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a cooling
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chamber for 48-72hrs
after
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it is baked in two steps, first
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moderate
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a moderate
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temperature of 200 to 980 degrees
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then
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and then
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in
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higher
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a higher
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temperature of 870 to 1300 degrees.
Afterwards
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it is packed and sent to the delivery.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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