The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words 100 Percentage of households 90 80 70 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Percentage of households with electrical appliances (1920-2019) 2000 2019 1080 1960 1920 1940 Year ~O- Vacuum cleaner - Washing machine mo Refrigerator Number of hours of housework* per week, per household (1920-2019) Number of hours per week 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 2019 € 2000 4980 1960 1920 1940 Year • 0 Hours per week

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words

100

Percentage of households

90

80

70

60

50

40

30

20

10

0

Percentage of households with electrical appliances

(1920-2019)

2000

2019

1080

1960

1920

1940

Year

~O- Vacuum cleaner

- Washing machine mo Refrigerator

Number of hours of housework* per week, per household (1920-2019)

Number of hours per week

60

50

40

30

20

10

0

2019

€ 2000

4980

1960

1920

1940

Year

• 0 Hours per week
The given images depict line graphs representing the trends in the ownership of electrical appliances and how many
hours
they
spend
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in households between 1920 and 2019. As can be seen from the graph, there are three electrical equipment used by
people
namely washing machines, refrigerators, and vacuum cleaners. These three components showed a fluctuation in
this
graph.
Moreover
, the usage of the number of
hours
showed
gradual
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a gradual
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reduction from 1920 to 2019.
On the other hand
, in 1920, a lower percentage of
people
used refrigerators than after it dramatically increased until 1960.
Likewise
, in the past time 30% of vacuum cleaners were used by the country's
people
then
it consistently increased until 2000 from 100%, remaining years followed equal percentage by
people
.
Furthermore
, in 1920, the majority of society used washing machines at 40%.
However
, following years it increased only by 30%.
Moreover
, in 1920, a higher amount of
hours
was used at 50
hours
per week.
Consequently
, it showed a reduction in 1960 at 20%. After remaining years it declined by 10
hours
per week.
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