On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the anything lost write a letter to the manager of you insurance company in your letter.

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Dear sir, I am writing to inform you that

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have recently lost my digital camera

while

on holiday in

lahore

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Lahore

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. The

cmaera

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camera

is a black cannon and it cost $1500 when

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bought it

last

month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels and was in a brown leather case with my name on it. I lost it when

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was having coffee with my husband in

Cafe

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the Cafe

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. Coffee day on mall road

lahore

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Lahore

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. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes when

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noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the

above mentioned

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item and

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need to do in order to proceed. I look forward to

heaving

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from you. Yours faithfully, Aliza

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

126 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the anything lost write a letter to the manager of you insurance company in your letter.

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