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Many young people today change their jobs or careers every few years. Do you think this has more advantages than disadvantages?

In today’s modern society, various new employment opportunities make the younger generation
change
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 their occupations every few years.
Although
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 changing
jobs
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 has a certain merit, I am firmly convinced that its demerits are more significant. On the one hand, a major benefit when
people
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change
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 their occupations several times is that they can have more
experience
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 with many kinds of
jobs
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.
This
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 is mainly because
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 the same time, if they have different
jobs
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, they can obtain more
working
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experiences
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experience
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 and skills.
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, they can discover their potential and passion more easily.
For instance
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, Jenn Im, who is a famous
youtuber
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YouTuber
, had tried many
jobs
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such
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 as writing or teaching before becoming a beauty blogger.
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, changing
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 often may bring experiences that staying in one job cannot provide.
On the other hand
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, it is my firm belief that there are some drawbacks that cannot be neglected. The first significant drawback is that
people
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 do not have enough time to have profound
experience
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. In today’s world of work, a fundamental condition which applies to many positions in a company requires a minimum of 2 or 3 years of
experience
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 in the professional field.
As a consequence
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,
people
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 who
change
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 their
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jobs
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 every few years may find it hard to find a decent job. Another major drawback is that employees who
change
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 their
jobs
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 often may lose
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 benefits
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 as health insurance and bonuses. To illustrate
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 point, in Vietnam, employees can receive an amount of bonus on Tet holiday, but staff who work for only a few months may not receive that money. In conclusion,
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 changing
jobs
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 may help
people
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 get more
experience
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 and find their
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 work, I personally think that its disadvantages including the lack of profound
experience
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 or the loss of non-salary benefits are more significant.

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