Some people say that children should be involved making school rules ,some argue that should be in charge of the making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
I take into account;
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school
develops their lows
. Nowadays school
student
has the
some Remove the article
apply
responsibilities
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responsibility
school
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for school
rules
and regulations. Therefore
, handful
of people assumes Add an article
a handful
student
need to attend of the making college
lows
. However
, some folk fight that parent
must Fix the agreement mistake
parents
be
Verb problem
play
big
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a big
roll
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role
of
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in
build-up
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building
rules
. Nevertheless
, my
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in my
opinion
making school
rules
adults
should be in charge and before take
Verb problem
making
decision
any Correct article usage
a decision
lows
wants to get Correct your spelling
law
idea
from the students. Fix the agreement mistake
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This
essay will discuss both views also
provide reasons with examples and my opinion
in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
someone say
for Correct subject-verb agreement
says
create
of Replace the word
the creation
college
low
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apply
children
should be involved. Thus
, Student
join Fix the agreement mistake
Students
making
Change preposition
in making
rules
I would like to say, it is not suitable for the
Correct article usage
apply
maintain
Wrong verb form
maintaining
school
standard
. Fix the agreement mistake
standards
For instance
, In Malaysia
some Add a comma
Malaysia,
school
can Fix the agreement mistake
schools
be
Verb problem
help
children
involved developed
their Wrong verb form
develop
lows
. As a result
, if college
wants to change some Add an article
a college
the college
act
Fix the agreement mistake
acts
could not
change without Wrong verb form
cannot
children
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children's
participations
. Like Fix the agreement mistake
participation
this
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these
conditions
teachers are unable to Add a comma
conditions,
controlled
the child, Because of, the Change the verb
control
above
mentions Correct word choice
abovementioned
children
associated
with Add a missing verb
are associated
create
Wrong verb form
creating
school
directives impossible to maintain the standard of college
regulations.
On the one hand, someone
argue making academy Correct your spelling
some
rules
adults
should be in charge. But, I would say, it is good when develop
directives their Change the verb form
developing
want
to get ideas from the Replace the word
wanting
student
. However
, my opinion
also
, Before
making any regulation Correct your spelling
that before
adults
must want to point from
the Change preposition
out
children
because Add the comma(s)
, at
at
the end, Change preposition
in
problem
arise in enforcing the education institute Fix the agreement mistake
problems
lows
created by the adults
. For instance
, in Sri Lanka
one of Add a comma
Lanka,
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the schools
schools
parents and teachers worked together was Fix the agreement mistake
school
changed
Wrong verb form
change
time
of using Add an article
the time
cafeteria
. The first 15 minutes were Correct article usage
the cafeteria
reserve
for the teachers and the rest for the Wrong verb form
reserved
children
. Even so, it was not possible to implements
because it has practical problems. If the before was enacted Change the verb
implement
this
problem would not have been faced.
To conclude
, in my point of view, in the school
making regulations when involved
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it involved
child
impossible to maintain the standard of Fix the agreement mistake
children
college
lows
also
when making rules
it is a good way adults
Change preposition
for adults
be
in charge. Fix the infinitive
to be
Nevertheless
, in my opinion
is that time they must get ideas from the Add a comma
opinion,
student
.I believed
if they get Wrong verb form
believe
idea
from Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
children
, they can easily manage the college
standard.Submitted by himalhi.deepthi on
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