Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Aeroplanes have been developing and becoming more popular,
vegetables
and
fruits
are delivered to some countries where
such
plants
grow difficult or climate and weather are strict. A lot of people think
that is
a good way to provide
fruits
and
vegetables
but it still has many drawbacks.
This
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views and give the author's opinion. It must be understood that transporting by aircraft was more faster and convenient.
In other words
, transportation with aeroplanes can keep
plants
more fresh and clean.
Then
,
this
type of delivery can apply costs more cheaper than by cars or trucks.
Such
as many African countries, apply vessels and container ships to import
fruits
and
vegetables
but the amount of goods kept fresh and clean was not ensured.
On the other hand
, people believe that trading food items is not beneficial because they think both of the quality of
plants
. Citizens can feel anxious about the quality.
Secondly
, technology is
becoming
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increasing and
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state-of-the-art in order to create more kinds of
fruits
that can grow
up
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every season.
For example
, in China, they
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type of durian and rambutan can mature whole year. In my opinion, I agree
that is
a good idea. Trading
fruits
and
vegetables
by aircraft can be quicker and safer for goods.
Moreover
, it has lots of advantages for import and export
plants
in order to level up the country's finances and economy.
For instance
, Thailand is a country in Asia which became wealthy because
exports
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the
fruits
and
vegetables
In conclusion, aircraft has become more popular and it can be used for trading
plants
faster and fresher.
However
, many developed countries are finding ways to grow
up
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out of season.
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