Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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in the use of air transportation to ship types of agricultural products to countries where they cannot be developed or

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. There are a minority of people

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that

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is acceptable because of the speed advantage

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the opposite disagree and believe that it is unacceptable

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trade around the

world

. It must be recognized that agrarian materials have a very short lifetime and if they do not

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to them advertises, they can be damaged and the investment to the farmer will be dropped. By transporting it by aircraft, the quality will be kept at the highest standard and ensure the sustainability investment for the grower. Take Japan as a prime example, where the weather is unsuitable for growing and by conveying the fruits from other countries, their food supplement has been secured.

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, it is easy to understand why gardening goods should be dumped by aircraft

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their own partnership.

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amount of

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told that the unaffordable price is the biggest barrier to

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it.

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reason, they trust that the producer cannot afford the enormous price

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.

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point may be true, but the

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from the government will make

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it possible for the

laborer

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to move their products to the potential barter.

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writer believes that

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increasing agricultural goods around the

world

,

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will boost the

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financial

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.

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trading, the

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will rise

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for non-developed countries. Because of

this

, it is very necessary to develop aircraft shipping around the

world

.

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speed and

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success are essential points that

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to be considered.

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, it should have been shown that the advantages are bigger than

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