In many countries, government spent large sum of money on the arts, and this is supported by some taxpayers as both why. Other, however, think that this money would be better spent on health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an argument whether national politics should outley more budget on health and education

instead

of spending it on the

arts

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extent. From the viewpoint of agreement, the idea can be thought

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much more rational and realistic without

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. Health is a matter

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human lives and education is

critical

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factor to

develope

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developing

the worldwide society, so both are

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crucial

critical

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comparison with the

arts

.

On the contrary

, with no doubt, the

arts

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for some civilizations, and the job tends to be difficult to make a living.

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reason, there is a

neccesity

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necessity

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more

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support in

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area. In my opinion, governments could decrease the proportion of money on the

arts

because it is possible for artists to earn profits

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other jobs than

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, but

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ill

people need to pay

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amount of money as soon as possible sometimes depending on their health situation. And there is no way to overcome the

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situation except for

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governments'

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support.

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is why I advocate the agreement with the statement.