The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the countryside of Langley in two years, 1910 and 1950. Looking from an
overall
perspective, over the span of forty years, the town became greener in 1950. What is more, houses were changed to flats.
According to
the data, residents could live in high-rise buildings in 1950,
instead
of cottages. What is more, they had more space for walking,
for example
, a large park with a lake and a children’s play area was created in the centre of the town. In 1910, there was only one store located on the top of Sherman Street,
while
forty years later, three shops occupied New Lane. As can be seen from the information, the factory had been demolished by 1940.
Moreover
, the cottages of the staff disappeared, of course, because there was
not
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railway line in 1940 so workers
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their job. The cafe and the laundry were
also
opposite each other. New Lane is the street that had been added by 1940,
while
Sherman Mansions had vanished.
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