The plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
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digaram
represents the plan of the site of an Correct your spelling
diagram
airport
at present and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Use synonyms
This
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an
southwest Change the article
a
airport
.
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is looks
amazing after the redevelopment of Change the verb form
looks
an
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the
airport
. It avails more facilities for Use synonyms
thr
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the
traavellers
.
In detail, the Southwest Correct your spelling
travellers
airport
at present looks small with Use synonyms
less
facilities Change the quantifier
fewer
whereas
after Linking Words
redevolpment
they avail more facilities. At Correct your spelling
redevelopment
old
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the old
Use synonyms
airport
at the Add a comma
airport,
departures
there are only Add a comma
departures,
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a cafe
cafe
and Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
chech
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check
in
. After Change preposition
apply
entring
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entering
into
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apply
the an
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the
an
airport
the Use synonyms
travellers
should Use synonyms
check
in and after Use synonyms
completion
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completing
of
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apply
check
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in
they Correct word choice
apply
move
to the Use synonyms
cafe
for some refreshment and Use synonyms
relax themselves
. They will Wrong verb form
relaxation
move
to the gates by Use synonyms
walk
. Wrong verb form
walking
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While
arrival there is a passport control customs and Change preposition
Upon
they
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the
travellers
will come out of Use synonyms
the an
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the
an
airport
and take Use synonyms
taxi
, auto or Add an article
a taxi
an transport
to go to their locality. Remove the article
transport
a means of transport
a mode of transport
Theses
are the small Correct your spelling
These
facilites
available at the old Correct your spelling
facilities
airport
.
After the redevelopment of Use synonyms
an
Correct article usage
the
airport
, it has got good Use synonyms
facilites
after the Correct your spelling
facilities
redevolpment
.At the Correct your spelling
redevelopment
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departures
departure
depatures
there is a Add a comma
depatures,
cafe
, bag drop and Use synonyms
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check in
. The Add a hyphen
check-in
travellers
can Use synonyms
check
in and drop the bag at Use synonyms
counter
and they can Correct article usage
the counter
move
to Use synonyms
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cafe
for their Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
refreshment
,here extra facility is avail for the Fix the agreement mistake
refreshments
passangers
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passengers
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that
is bag drop.After the completion Correct pronoun usage
which
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this
process they can spend time Change preposition
of this
in
window shopping or those Change preposition
apply
whose
want to shop Correct pronoun usage
who
they
can.Correct pronoun usage
apply
New
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The new
A new
airport
is Use synonyms
rebuiled
with shops.After they can Correct your spelling
rebuild
rebuilt
move
to their flight take of Use synonyms
gate
,here more gates are there but in the old Add an article
the gate
airport
. Use synonyms
They
Correct your spelling
The
travellers
can take Use synonyms
sky
train to Add an article
the sky
move
to their gates.There is Use synonyms
process
to be done Add an article
a process
the process
while
arrival, Linking Words
there
passport control customs and after they can have their refreshment at Correct your spelling
their
Use synonyms
cafe
. They can withdraw money from Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
ATM
if needed. Coming out from an Fix the agreement mistake
ATMs
airport
they can hire Use synonyms
taxi
to Add an article
a taxi
move
to their place. Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Airport
is been redeveloped with good infrastructure and Add an article
The airport
avails
more Verb problem
has
facilites
for Correct your spelling
facilities
the
passengers.Correct article usage
apply
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