Pie charts shows the electricity production in France and Australia in 1980 and 2000.
The pie chart below provides information about the percentage of electricity production between France and Australia in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, as is shown in the figure Australia had Coal more than all of the other sources While
France had an almost equal amount of sources. However
, both countries have changed in the past years.
Nevertheless
, Australia's pie chart shows 50 of 100 units
of Coal in 1980, which increased to 130 out of 170 units
in 2000. Moreover
, Oil was 10 units
of 100 in 1980 then
downward till 2 units
of 170 in 2000 and Natural Gas was 20 units
and ended up the same. However
, the Hydro Power was 20 units
of 100 in 1980,
and increased to 36 Remove the comma
apply
units
in 2000.
In addition
, in 1980 the France pie chart has the same percentage for Coal and Natural gas which is 25 units
of 90 but only Natural Gas changed to Low race to 2 units
of 180 in 2000. However
, Coal hasn't experienced any changes .Submitted by elshamrifawaz on
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