You recently stayed in a hotel in another city. When you got home you discovered that you had left something of value in the room. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter •describe the item that you left behind and say where you left it • ask the hotel to arrange to send it to you • suggest a way to pay for the postage
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you? I am writing to bring your attention to my stay in your hotel on 25th October in room 37.
Firstly
, I would appreciate the services that you are providing in your hotel including breakfast and cleaning. However
, I am writing regarding my precious ring that I left on the table in your room as it is so important me
. Could you please help me to find it?
Change preposition
to me
To begin
with, The ring has a significant meaning to me. The details of the ring are that It is made of diamond and has a gold colour. Furthermore
, I must be on television TV. because I removed it before taking a shower. Could you please check and send it back to me?
I believe the best way to send it back is Canada post
because it is near to you as wellCapitalize word
Post
me
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, I will pay all expenses of speed posting on my door or to you after receiving my item as the hotel is far from me. I can pay to
you Change preposition
apply
with
Change preposition
by
Correct article usage
an e-tranfer
e-tranfer
or by debit at my door.
Here, I am attaching my contact details with my phone number. My house is at 622 Rosehill Street, and k2S0k3 is my postal code. You can contact me anytime on Correct your spelling
e-transfer
this
number 2898232203. I would appreciate your help and kindness and planning to come this
winter. I am hoping to hear from you.
Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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