You recently stayed in a hotel in another city. When you got home you discovered that you had left something of value in the room. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter •describe the item that you left behind and say where you left it • ask the hotel to arrange to send it to you • suggest a way to pay for the postage

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Dear Sir or Madam, How are you? I am writing to bring your attention to my stay in your hotel on 25th October in room 37.

Firstly

, I would appreciate the services that you are providing in your hotel including breakfast and cleaning.

However

, I am writing regarding my precious ring that I left on the table in your room as it is so important

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. Could you please help me to find it?

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with, The ring has a significant meaning to me. The details of the ring are that It is made of diamond and has a gold colour.

Furthermore

, I must be on television TV. because I removed it before taking a shower. Could you please check and send it back to me? I believe the best way to send it back is Canada

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because it is near to you as well

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, I will pay all expenses of speed posting on my door or to you after receiving my item as the hotel is far from me. I can pay

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you

with

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an e-tranfer

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e-tranfer

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e-transfer

or by debit at my door. Here, I am attaching my contact details with my phone number. My house is at 622 Rosehill Street, and k2S0k3 is my postal code. You can contact me anytime on

this

number 2898232203. I would appreciate your help and kindness and planning to come

this

winter. I am hoping to hear from you. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Gurpinder Kaur

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8 paragraphs

247 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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