Some people think that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education and healthcare are the most important facilities for
people
that some of them think they should be free for humane and
baied
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based
baked
bailed
by government. In
this
statement
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statement,
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we will
disscus
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discuss
why
government
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the government
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ought to offer these
service
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services
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free
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for free
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. I think it is better for
citizen
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citizens
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. Meanwhile,
government
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the government
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for
citizen
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citizens
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is look
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looks
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like
parent
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a parent
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for
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to
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family. They have to care
all
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for all
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bodies.
Consequntly
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Consequently
, authors have the main power and
extrem
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extreme
ability to support everyone.
People
live in
country
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the country
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and work
hardly
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hard
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to
raised
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raise
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their place. They
strugle
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struggle
to help
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
to
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apply
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protect their land. So, they deserve to
gain
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have
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a good life.
This
can be when
accessebility
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accessibility
to
needs
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needs to
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be
easly
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easily
for them. Learning at school or university and medical care should be unpaid. These are the most
requirment
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requirements
to feel
safety
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safe
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at
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in
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place
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the place
a place
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.
Finally
, a good life in
country
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the country
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is made by
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
helping
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help
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.
Which
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This
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means
people
who live in
relax
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relaxed
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environment
they
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apply
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become happy and
ambtious
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ambitious
to serve their place .
As some
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Some
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people
think
people
meit to
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must
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have
worthy
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a worthy
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life by
gain
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gaining
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the most necessary
requirment
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requirements
.
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