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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.
#anthropology #graduates #university #course #salaries #anthropologists #work #five #yeas
The pie chart provides information about the types of
work
, which are appeared to
students
, who completed undergraduate
course
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courses
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 at the university. The table gives information about the incomes, which are related to anthropologists, who worked in the subject afterwards five years.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most significant category of destinations is "Full-time"
work
,
while
 the others have less success with
students
.
However
, the
highest paid
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employments
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employment
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 spread to freelance consultants and
government
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the government
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 sector. It is noticeable,
the
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that
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 certain group of people, who selected
a
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work
in
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 freelance consultants and government sector, have received more benefits in their salaries (in the first type of employment 40% of all
group
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groups
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 earn from 75000 to 99999
dollars
,
other
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the other
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 40% get more 100000
dollars
, in the second type the half of employees earn 100000
dollars
).
On the other hand
, the majority of employees (35%) in private companies earn from 50000 to 74999
dollars
. Most of
graduated
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the graduated
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students
 take
a
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apply
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part in full-time
work
 (
this
 area contains more than
a
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half of
general
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the general
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 amount of
students
). The part-time
work
, which contains postgraduate
students
, shows the opposite information to the previous category of
work
 (only 5% of all graduated
group
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groups
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 have decided to
work
 in
this
 direction).
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, students, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree course
  • chart
  • table
  • findings
  • conclusions
  • salary data
  • comparisons
  • summarize
  • opinion
  • suggestions
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