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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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The
staff
 in some organizations is obliged to follow their dress code at all times. The advantages of
this
 are that employees do not have to worry much about what to wear the next
day
 and they look more professional.
However
, the disadvantages are that wearing a
uniform
 every
day
 can be monotonous and increase their workload. The significant benefit of wearing a
uniform
 is that people do not have to spend much time
on
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thinking about their next
day
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 clothing. Generally, it is the biggest task for individuals to decide what to wear and if companies have some dress code for their
staff
,
this
 rule is like a
problem- solver
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.
Additionally
, the
staff
 seems more professional in a
uniform
. When they carry a particular piece of clothing, it means they are representing their company and respecting the
work
 ethics. In Australia,
for instance
, people working at Coles wear red t-shirts with its logo, which
make
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 them
to
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look more presentable, professional and identifiable among the shoppers
visit
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 Coles. Getting a monotonous feeling by wearing the same clothing each
day
 is the biggest disadvantage of following the
uniform
 culture. Sometimes people want to look different and putting on the same clothing daily can be boring. But still, when they have to do it, it adversely affects their mood and productivity at
work
.
Moreover
, they have to wash their clothing almost every
day
 , which
increase
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 their workload and somehow
affect
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 their mental health, when they have to run after
work
-related things during most part of the
day
. In India,
for example
, employees get fined, if they
not
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 follow the dress code, which is
indirect
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 way of punishing and pushing them towards
work related
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 tasks in their personal time.
Thus
,
this
 example vividly explains
that
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how
uniform
 obligation at
workplace
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 affects employees' personal
life
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lives
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. In conclusion,
while
uniform
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a uniform
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 culture at
work
 solves
staff
's clothing-related dilemma situations and encourage professionalism, the drawbacks are that it brings boredom and more workload in their daily life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniforms
  • staff
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • promotes
  • belonging
  • team spirit
  • professional
  • cohesive
  • image
  • security
  • identification
  • reduces
  • expenses
  • employees
  • decide
  • wear
  • fosters
  • equality
  • minimizes
  • differences
  • individuality
  • self-expression
  • uncomfortable
  • restrictive
  • body types
  • sizes
  • maintenance
  • cleanliness
  • control
  • restriction
  • personal style
  • fashion preferences
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