making smoking illegal is the best way to protect people from harmful effects of tabacco

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smoking has damaging effects in many cases physically and mentally.

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habit as illegal in any country is so helpful to limit it, there is

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is the measure key to putting a limitation in order to protect the community of all ages.

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aim goal is to provide a better life for every person in society, so smokers should be ready to bear the weight if they try to break the rules.

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, if we could reduce the amount of

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who smoke

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would save our clean air and green areas. Another point to consider, is governments spend a huge amount of money each year to help

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will save our country's pockets and we can invest it in other enhances

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, after a short period, we will amazed by the high increase in

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, 30 per cent of the government deeply looking for smoking

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beneficial for both the young and elderly sides of any society, and I totally agree with

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