making smoking illegal is the best way to protect people from harmful effects of tabacco

There is no denying the fact that

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smoking has damaging effects in many cases physically and mentally.

While

it is a commonly held belief that,

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habit as illegal in any country is so helpful to limit it, there is

also

an argument that opposes it. I consider that

this

is the measure key to putting a limitation in order to protect the community of all ages.

To begin

with, smoking work against public health and self-love goal.

In other words

, when you smoke you do not just damage your body, but

also

other folks by the air wave coming from your side, and

this

shows clearly sight of less responsibility those

people

have.

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aim goal is to provide a better life for every person in society, so smokers should be ready to bear the weight if they try to break the rules.

For instance

, if we could reduce the amount of

people

who smoke

this

would save our clean air and green areas. Another point to consider, is governments spend a huge amount of money each year to help

people

quitting from

this

habit.

therefore

,

this

will save our country's pockets and we can invest it in other enhances

such

as education and public transportation.

Moreover

, after a short period, we will amazed by the high increase in

people

's awareness toward themselves and their country.

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, 30 per cent of the government deeply looking for smoking

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to help them to heal in special hospitals and institutions. In conclusion, there is no easy answer to

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question, On balance,

however

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beneficial for both the young and elderly sides of any society, and I totally agree with

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statement.