Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people suggest that

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and

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should be offered an equal

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of university seats in each subject. In my opinion,

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policy can bring significant educational benefits to the

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individuals equal rights. A good reason to accept

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of

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among both genders is that it can bring equal rights. In many underdeveloped countries in which

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are not offered equal educational opportunities as

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, allocating a fixed

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of seats to

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at universities can

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steps to mitigate gender discrimination, helping those oppressed girls

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their

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. In Afghanistan,

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, millions of girls struggle to keep up with their male peers because of cultural restrictions, and

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consequently

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most

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university seats are filled with boys.

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unjust situation could be alleviated with the mentioned policy, as a beneficial means to achieve a fairer society. Another point to consider is that

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of boys and girls in a class can foster a more inclusive educational atmosphere. Because of physiological differences between the brains of

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and

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, they tend to approach differently toward same subjects.

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,

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seem to react more logically compared to

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who usually tend to be more subtle and consider others’ emotions as well. Meaning that

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the combination of both genders in a class expressing their points of view can lead to nurturing a wider perspective in

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. In conclusion, a balanced proportion of male and female participants in university subjects can foster a more holistic cognitive environment for

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, and

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it can act as a revolutionary means to abolish

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discrimination, leading to a more progressive society.