The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over 3 different areas from 1985 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the wheat exports in
Australia
, Canada
and Europe over the period of 1985 to 1990.
Overall
, the data from the three locations have fluctuated in numbers, while
Canada
had the biggest difference in fluctuation.
Firstly
, in 1985, Canada
had the highest figure of wheat transported outside, while
Australia
had the lowest at 15. Canada
's figure dropped to 18 the next year before sharply peaking at 25 in 1988. Although
it rapidly decreased to about 15 in 1989, it increased again 18
in 1990.
Change preposition
to 18
Moreover
, the fluctuations were less for the other two areas. Australia
experienced a slight growth of 16 from 15 in 1986; however
, it gradually declined to around 12 by 1990. Europe on the other hand
, witnessed an increase in data in comparison to Australia
. It began at 17 in 1985, then
fell to 15 by 1988 and then
finally
peaked at 21 in 1990 by overtaking the rest.Submitted by Mazam on
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