Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fuit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Up to now fruit and vegetable become more and more important thing in our life so,

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plane is being used to transport vegetables and fruit to

others

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countries which hardly plant or

out

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of season. Some people think it is

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idealistic plant

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some individuals do not agree with it.

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with the formal choice and I will highlight the reasons why in the following essay. On the one

hand

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using

aircraft

is a good idea

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transport because

plane

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planes

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can do it

more and more faster

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than people

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the same time.

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the quality of food or vegetable which is transported by plane is high so it can

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protect the health of people who

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hand

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there are some problems if we want to

use

aircraft

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about

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the cost that we need to spend on maintenance or to fix one or more

aircraft

one

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year is really high.

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we need to worry about the energy that

aircraft

need to

use

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judgment and it

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have

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a lot of problems if the

aircraft

run

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out of oil.

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my opinion

aircraft

is an idealistic chance in now day.

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if we have enough money to operate it smoothly our life will become more flexible and comfortable

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, choosing to increase the

use

of planes is the best way to supply green foods to other poor countries and problems with planting land. So we can conclude that

aircraft

are the best transportation to do transit work from all over the world.

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Fully explain your ideas

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