Air craft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season.Some people consider it a good idea,but some people appose it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,the
plane
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is being used to transport
vegetables
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and
fruit
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to
others
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countries which hardly plant or out of season.The majority of people said
that is
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a good idea
while
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others do not think that.I agree with the formal choice and I will highlight the reasons why in the following essay.
Firstly
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,the
air craft
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aircraft
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is
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apply
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used to
transporting
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transport
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is a good idea.It can move the
fruit
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fastly
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fast
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.
In addition
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,it can help to protect the
fruit
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or
vegetables
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avoid
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and avoid
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the
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apply
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spoiled
fruit
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.
For example
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,between the
plane
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and the container,the percentage of spoiled
fruit
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or
vegetables
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in
container
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the container
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is higher than transport by
plane
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.
On the other hand
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,
carry
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by
the
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apply
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plane
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has a big negative impact on the economy.
Carry
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Carrying
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by
the
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apply
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plane
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is
waste
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a waste
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the fuel and it
do
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is
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not necessary.If the country
near
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is near
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that area,it can be misspended. From my point of view,I believe that
convey
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conveying
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by the
air craft
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aircraft
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is not a bad idea.It can give the
fruit
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and
vegetables
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more
fastly
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quickly
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and keep the food in good condition.
To sum up
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,I think transport by the
air craft
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aircraft
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is
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more convenitent
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convenitent
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convenient
than
carry
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carrying
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by other vehicles.To maintain the food and keep
in
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it in
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good repair.
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