One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The
deverlopment
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development
of medication can help human live longer and increase their expectation of
life
. I believe that the
adventage
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advantages
of the
deverlopment outweight
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development outweigh
the disadvantage because
although
this
can lead to
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society, the
deverlopment
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development
can help
people
prevent
paintful
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painful
from any diseases. Improving
in
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medical
care
make
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people
live longer,
lead
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to
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aging
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society problem. When
people
get older and live longer, make population of
elder
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more than other ages. A large amount of money
are spend
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on elder
care
given
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. In Thailand,
for example
,
government
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have to spend over 30 percent of
budget
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to
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care
of
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the elder
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elder
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,
instead
of developing other sector. The biggest benefit of medical
care
deverlopment
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development
is that
people
can reduce
painful
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from
thier
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their
diseases.
People
do not have to worry about their health
problem
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problems
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when medication is
improve
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, so they can focus on
otherthings
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other things
of
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their
life
that make
thier
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their
life
more
fulfill
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and more expectancy. In
conclysion
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conclusion
,
althrough
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although
the
deverlopment
of medication can lead to
aging
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society, I
stongly beliveve
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strongly believe
that
the
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deverlopment
can
benfit
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benefit
people
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life
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lives
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more.
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