The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions.
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among
this
issue, and various measures can be taken by governments to improve this
situation.
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due to
their ages. Their health could has
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effect on their Add an article
a negative
job
performance. Additionally
, the rate of unemployees
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money and they commit Change preposition
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. Not only that, the teenagers who Fix the agreement mistake
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also
affected. A good example is that people who have just graduated could not find a job
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However
, the older would be redundant because of their health.
To addressed
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address
this
problem, I think that companies should soon implement early retirement incentive programs for devoted elderly labourers. Some social benefits should be given to ensure taht
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Besides
, more job
oppoturnities
should be created for young people. The best example of Correct your spelling
opportunities
this
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