some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged . others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adult

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and the opinion on the same. to embark, one of the paramount rationale that the sense of

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competition

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people learn many valuable lessons. sportsmanship is one of the greatest

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competition

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few citizens believe that

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taught to the kids is far more useful to become a good adult.

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that teaching co-operation in them can make their life even more

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any group and can

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learning cooperation tend to perseve tolerance and respect for others which is a learning for

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key for a child as he grows they will

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to groom their child.