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some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged . others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adult

#people #sense #competition #children #co-operate #adult
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 upbringing today's
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children
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 in adulthood as some folks
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 and the opinion on the same. to embark, one of the paramount rationale that the sense of
competition
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children
 would bring up their determination and encourage them to succeed in future. as some humans think that the
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competition
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 people learn many valuable lessons. sportsmanship is one of the greatest
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 have seen
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think for the betterment of one own is
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competition
 can teach many essential lessons in youngsters for life. despite
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the
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innumerable
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 few citizens believe that
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 taught to the kids is far more useful to become a good adult.
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 that teaching co-operation in them can make their life even more
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children
 learning cooperation tend to perseve tolerance and respect for others which is a learning for
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 it is prominent that both
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 key for a child as he grows they will
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