The older people who need employment have to compete with younger one. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?

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modern time, career plays a crucial role in the life of

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everybody in

everybody

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world

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age

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rivalry. For that reason, many

people

fall into unemployment

especially

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the aged

people

.

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phenomenon and

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offer some solutions to it.

Age

discrimination becomes a barrier

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people

in the

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age

. In

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century, under the development of technology and AI , unemployment become more and more

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particularly

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older

people

. When recruitment , leaders

also

want to choose the younger

instead

of the older

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, they think that younger

people

can

adopt

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with

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the new changes better than older

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although

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.

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issue can create

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imbalance between two

age

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groups, it

also

show

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the iniquitous activities of the directions of the factory. To illustrate

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point , consider Facebook - one of the biggest apps in the

world

,

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recent survey

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that the average

age

of the employees who want to work in

this

company stands at 28. It

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really

create

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the

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big distance

with

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the

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companies. A possible solution to

this

problem would be to have more policies to enhance the issues. The

authority

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should apply strict laws to prevent

this

from happening.

Besides

, they

also

encourage the contribution of the older in the social fields

in particular

and in all

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in general. Taking Japan as a prime example,

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country

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as the old

country

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at the highest point.

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,

this

country

promote the older dedication to the

country

and have

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suitable campaign to urge the inhabitant to still work. For

this

effort, the economy of

this

country

stand

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at the top of the

world

and so the technology

do

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to

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. In conclusion,

this

essay reiterates that

due to

the concern of unemployment in the

world

can lead to

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discrimination between all ages .

Therefore

, it should have been shown that promoting and having policies is urgently

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needed

need

.