The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?

Nowadays, the

problem

of competition between older

people

and younger ones is becoming an increasing issue across the globe.

However

, there are still some ways to solve

this

problem

. The foremost

problem

caused by competitive workers is the rate of unemployment of older

people

in many countries is increasing. It should be recognized that nowadays is a development of technology. Younger

people

is

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easier

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more likely

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to approach

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smart devices than older

people

.

Consequently

, younger

people

have many good

conditons

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conditions

to be employed,

not to mention

they

also

use social media to look into their

job

in the future so they can know what is the wonderful and suitable

job

for them.

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, in my country,

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also

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about their

job

in the future. They are going to apply for a popular

job

such

as IT, logistics, ….

Therefore

,

this

create

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competition

wih

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with

older

people

and younger ones.

However

, some

people

think that high demands for

job

recruitment can trigger generation

conflicted

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between different aged

people

. There is a belief that because of the development in many countries, companies need to recruit more potential workers and

suitable

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with

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for

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that

job

. They are right to a certain extent, but younger children do not have a

widde

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wide

range of careers, so

this

is harsh for them to work in

new

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environment. A possible solution to

this

problem

that

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the candidates should be employed based on their age range. To be more specific, if the superiors hire

people

with specific ages

such

as those who are over the fifties only,

then

by narrowing the candidate's ages, there would be less severe competition. In conclusion,

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governments should arrange

workers

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for workers

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to work based on age range to fit in with the development in the world nowadays.