The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?

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Nowadays, the
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of competition between older
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and younger ones is becoming an increasing issue across the globe.
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, there are still some ways to solve
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problem
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. The foremost
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caused by competitive workers is the rate of unemployment of older
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in many countries is increasing. It should be recognized that nowadays is a development of technology. Younger
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is
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easier
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more likely
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to approach
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smart devices than older
people
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.
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, younger
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have many good
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conditions
to be employed,
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they
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use social media to look into their
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in the future so they can know what is the wonderful and suitable
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for them.
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, in my country,
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also
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learned
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about their
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in the future. They are going to apply for a popular
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such
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as IT, logistics, ….
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,
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create
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competition
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with
older
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and younger ones.
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, some
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think that high demands for
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recruitment can trigger generation
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between different aged
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. There is a belief that because of the development in many countries, companies need to recruit more potential workers and
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that
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. They are right to a certain extent, but younger children do not have a
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wide
range of careers, so
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is harsh for them to work in
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environment. A possible solution to
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problem
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the candidates should be employed based on their age range. To be more specific, if the superiors hire
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with specific ages
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as those who are over the fifties only,
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by narrowing the candidate's ages, there would be less severe competition. In conclusion,
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governments should arrange
workers
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for workers
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to work based on age range to fit in with the development in the world nowadays.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ageism
  • Generational divide
  • Technological advancements
  • Skills gap
  • Job scarcity
  • Industry preferences
  • Pension expenditure
  • Financial planning
  • Employability
  • Retraining programs
  • Upskilling opportunities
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