The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given image
depict
the table and line graph representing the trends in the value of a country's exports between 2015 and 2016 , Change the verb form
depicts
while
percentage differences in 2016 compared with 2015.
As can be seen from the graph, there are five categories products
Change preposition
of products
export
in 2015 and 2016. The majority of petroleum Wrong verb form
exported
products
exported
in 2015 and 2016 at approximately 60 Add a missing verb
were exported
billions
, Change to singular
billion
second
highest amount of earnings Add an article
the second
got
from engineered goods Verb problem
apply
in
between 2015 and 2016. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the minority of earning product
is Fix the agreement mistake
products
textile
in 2015 at almost 25 Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
billions
. Change to singular
billion
However
, in 2016, textiles and agricultural products
are
Wrong verb form
were
export
Wrong verb form
exported
Change preposition
at in
in
equal level at nearly 30 Correct your spelling
an
billions
.
On the Change to singular
billion
othe
hand, in 2016, petroleum and engineered Correct your spelling
other
products
are
exported Wrong verb form
were
than
in 2015 at 3% and 8.5% respectively. Correct quantifier usage
more than
While
, gems and jewelry
Change the spelling
jewellery
changes
in Wrong verb form
changed
values
Fix the agreement mistake
value
at
5.18% from 2015 to 2016. These Change preposition
by
products
only have
Wrong verb form
had
highly
Replace the word
higher
export
in 2015 than Fix the agreement mistake
exports
2016
. Change preposition
in 2016
Whereas
, agricultural products
show little amount of changes in values at 0.81%, however
, textiles show dramatical changes in values at 15.24%Submitted by krishmahendran19 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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