The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
The line graph displays details on the number of
people
travelling with
car, bus, Change preposition
by
train
in Britain daily between 1970 and 2030.The units Correct word choice
and train
is
measured in millions.
Change the verb form
are
Overall
,it is evident from the chart that, there was an upward trend in the use of all transportation mediums, with the use of bus
being an exception.
Fix the agreement mistake
buses
To begin
with, In 1970,the number of people
who travelled in
car was the highest amongst other transport systems at 5 Change preposition
by
million
, however
, that of the train
was the least at 2 million
. From 1970,the figure increased steadily across board
.
Correct article usage
the board
Furthermore
,the people
who Correct quantifier usage
number of people
transported
via car skyrocketed over the years to 9 Add a missing verb
are transported
million
by 2030 hitting the high of the chart. Although
, the figures of people
who commuted via train
plunged to almost 3 million
by 2030 being the least while
those who made use of bus
to commute made an intersection with the figure of Add an article
a bus
the bus
train
at 4 Fix the agreement mistake
trains
millions
between 2010 and 2020, and eventually rose to 5 Change to singular
million
millions
and was the second highest by 2030.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, train, million with synonyms.
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