You recently stayed in a hotel in another city. When you got home you discovered that you had left something of value in the room. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter •describe the item that you left behind and say where you left it • ask the hotel to arrange to send it to you • suggest a way to pay for the postage

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Dear sir I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I have been at your hotel for a week

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12 of October to 18 of October my name is Sara I was staying in room number 1009.

Unfortunatly

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Unfortunately

, When I

stay

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was staying

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at your hotel I lost a critical

when

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returend

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returned

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home I

relized

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realized

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that I left my Ipad , my Ipad gray in colour , version 2022

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, my background is my picture there is

an evidence

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to you it belongs me.

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last

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meeting with my company they need to finish our presentation as I work on it these days it is

extremly

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extremely

important to me at

lest

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least

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this

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week to have my device. I would be

greatful

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grateful

if you reserve a courier by DHL and I will pay

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you

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a charges

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whatever how is a cost. I really appreciate it. I am looking forward to hearing from you

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. Yours faithfully, Sara

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task achievement

Make sure to mention the name of the item you left behind and where you left it in the hotel.

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Suggest a specific method for the hotel to arrange to send the item.

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Provide more information on how you will pay for the postage.

coherence cohesion

Organize your ideas into separate paragraphs.

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Add a more polite and formal tone to your letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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