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You recently stayed in a hotel in another city. When you got home you discovered that you had left something of value in the room. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter •describe the item that you left behind and say where you left it • ask the hotel to arrange to send it to you • suggest a way to pay for the postage

#hotel #city #home #value #room #•describe #item #postage
Dear sir I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I have been at your hotel for a week
on
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 12 of October to 18 of October my name is Sara I was staying in room number 1009.
Unfortunatly
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Unfortunately
, When I
stay
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 at your hotel I lost a critical
when
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 I
returend
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returned
my
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home I
relized
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realized
realised
 that I left my Ipad , my Ipad gray in colour , version 2022
in addition
 , my background is my picture there is
an evidence
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 to you it belongs me.
My
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last
 meeting with my company they need to finish our presentation as I work on it these days it is
extremly
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extremely
 important to me at
lest
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this
 week to have my device. I would be
greatful
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grateful
 if you reserve a courier by DHL and I will pay
to
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you
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a charges
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 whatever how is a cost. I really appreciate it. I am looking forward to hearing from you
back
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. Yours faithfully, Sara
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Make sure to mention the name of the item you left behind and where you left it in the hotel.
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Suggest a specific method for the hotel to arrange to send the item.
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Provide more information on how you will pay for the postage.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into separate paragraphs.
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Add a more polite and formal tone to your letter.

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