The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph provides information about discharging the average
amount
of greenhouse gases per person in the four countries, the
UK
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the average
carbon
dioxide
emissions in Italy and Portugal experienced an increase
while
releasing
carbon
dioxide
in the
UK
and Sweden decreased notably over the 40 years, albeit, the
UK
represented the highest
amount
of
carbon
dioxide
emission
. The
amount
of
carbon
dioxide
emission
in Italy surged from 4 metric
tonnes
to over 6 metric
tonnes
in the first
decade
,
then
experienced a stable increase and in the
last
decade
, reached a plateau and stood under 8 metric
tonnes
although
Portugal in the first 30 years, saw a sharp increase in
carbon
dioxide
emission
,
similarly
, in the
last
decade
with just under 6 metric
tonnes
reached a plateau.
While
the
UK
discharged more than 10
tonnes
metric 1967, the
amount
of greenhouse gas declined significantly and in 2007 stood at above 8 metric
tonnes
. Sweden in the first
decade
witnessed a surge, amounting to approximately 10 metric
tonnes
;
however
, the average
carbon
dioxide
emission
from 1997 to 2007 decreased dramatically and stood under 6 metric
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, uk, carbon, dioxide, emission, tonnes, decade with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "plateau" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "surged" was used 2 times.

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  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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