Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that various
problems
in daily life could arise when you have to live in a foreign
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country
.
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, I agree that
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various
problems
could appear when living in a foreign
language speaking
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country
. I think it is not a big problem
due to
the technological improvements. On the one hand, it is difficult to instantly provide an answer to a question
due to
language
barriers. Some queries may need instant feedback. But some
problems
could appear
due to
long waiting
time
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times
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from the answering party caused by
communication
problems
.
For example
, police officers in Germany do not speak English.
Therefore
, the person needs a help from translator to continue the
communication
.
Otherwise
,
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points will be deducted from the driving license.
Therefore
,
communication related
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issues could appear when living in a foreign
language speaking
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country
.
On the other hand
, most smart devices offer
real time
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language
translations without an active internet connection.
Therefore
, dealing with
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people from foreign
country
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countries
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is not a big deal
due to
current technological enhancements.
For instance
, Google live translation was tested in India by selecting citizens from different age groups. Each individual
was participated
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to
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a real-life conversation with a person who does not speak
native
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language
of India. All the participants could perform their conversation with the help
from
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the translating device.
Thus
,
communication
problems
could
mitigate
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through the innovation of technological devices.
To conclude
, I believe that
the
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some practical
problems
could appear when
live
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in a foreign
language speaking
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country
. I think that it could be mitigated through the development of technological devices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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