Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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of people want to spend most of
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in their native place. These
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of
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of satisfaction and comfort level. My essay will provide details
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the merits
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and demerits of
this
aspect.
To begin
with,
individuals
who opt to live closer to their home town find themselves more secure and comfortable.
Moreover
, they have value advantage of many things,
firstly
they are already aware of
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of services.
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closer to
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their native
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town are aware of loopholes
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their area
therefore
they are not easily cheated by anyone.
Secondly
,
individuals
have
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about
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their culture, language and
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therefore
they find themselves more secure and comfortable.
Although
there are many advantages
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living closer to
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a place
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of origin
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disadvantages too.
Firstly
,
this
approach gives lesser exposure around the world.
For instance
, if
person
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want
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to opt
higher
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for higher
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education and flourishing jobs
then
there is
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to move out of their town,
this
will only
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if
individual
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an individual
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has
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the willingness
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to adapt
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in their approach.
Secondly
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and languages
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and
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with
variety
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a variety
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of talented professionals,
individuals
need to think
a head
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ahead
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and opt
changes
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for changes
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in their living
pattern
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.
To conclude
, living closer to
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gives
sense
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a sense
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of security and comfortable living
however
this
approach will be beneficial up to
certain
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period of time,
therefore
individuals
need to think
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ahead
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and prepare
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a realistic
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plan to move outside in order to explore more opportunities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Settlement
  • Hometown
  • Roots
  • Community
  • Emotional attachment
  • Sense of familiarity
  • Social network
  • Bond
  • Safety
  • Proximity
  • Support system
  • Heritage
  • Limited options
  • Risk aversion
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Unfamiliarity
  • Exploration
  • Adventurous spirit
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