Many people believe working from home is better than going to an office. Others believe it is better to work in an office environment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion about it

In the contemporary era, technology is involved in
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. Online working is wide
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spread
speed
currently and many workers. prefer
this
type of working
while
others still think that
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type of working can't replace the typical
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official
one. I think that frontal working is
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crucial
in some
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arriving
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an office is not possible.
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why
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of
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is growing.
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cases.
For instance
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COVID-19
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was the optimal way in order to decrease the
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illness
ratio, many companies couldn't manage
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initially
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and improve the option of online working and
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existence
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innovation
map.
On the other hand
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option
of working from home is not relevant for some specific
jobs
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them the exact diagnosis and the suitable treatment by the net. In that case, nothing can replace the frontal
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appointment
between the doctor and his client.
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meeting is the only way
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for the patient to
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communicate
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giver
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, in my front of view, working from
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is not realistic
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some specific
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, but it still may be an
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way of working in
jobs
the human interaction is not demanded. So we must always try to find the balance between advantages and drawbacks
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depending
on the certain requirement of the job.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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