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in many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is observed that in some specific countries, after delivering the infants, mothers are
elidgible
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eligible
 to opt for maternity leaves.
As per
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 my point of notion,
such
 policies definitely have more merits than D-merits. I will explain the pros in my upcoming
paragraphes
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paragraphs
. When a
mother
 delivers the baby. she goes through numerous
of
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ups and downs. As per the study conducted 90% of the mothers suffer from
post pregnancy
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 depression, which
further
 leads to anxiety ,anger and sometimes
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commiting
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committing
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 too.
Therefore
 during
such
 hard times, if the corporate support is in place,
then
 it can reduce their stress
due to
 job security. The new
mother
 will feel confident if her job is secured. She will be stressed
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 from her employment and the nourishing of the baby will be taken care
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 more energy and excitement.
Apart from
this
, after
enetring
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entering
 into parenthood, the expenses
also
gets
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 uphilled. So maternity leaves
plays
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very
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 significant role for new parents because these leaves are paid.
Therefore
 expenses can
be
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easily wind up by the
mother
 and father.
Moreover
, after the completion of maternity
leaves
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, the
mother
 will be more dedicated and enthusiastic towards her job as she
would
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 value the benefits given by the company during her hard times.
To conclude
, Employer shall
definiatly
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definitely
 bring
such
 lucrative and supporting policies as these policies have more pros than cons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • maternity leave
  • essential bonding
  • recovery time
  • mental health
  • postpartum depression
  • long-term child development
  • female participation
  • labor force
  • gender equality
  • parental leave
  • economic impacts
  • temporary loss
  • workload
  • small businesses
  • accommodate
  • operations
  • perpetuating
  • gender stereotypes
  • caregiving
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