some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that they are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these bills and give your own opinion.

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The issue of
loss
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of particular species of
plants
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and
animals
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has been becoming more popular these days through the risen interest of media
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as TV, news,
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and journals
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.
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some people believe that
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is the most essential issue in our world,
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others argue that there are several more crucial troubles including global warming,
water
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shortage
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or weather
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unpredictability
. I, personally, believe in the latter belief, in
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essay I will argue
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both sides and explain
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my perspective. People
who
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state that the
loss
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of particular
kind
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kinds
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of
animals
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and
plants
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has
devastating
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a devastating
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effect on the earth. Considering the interconnectedness of nature
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arguement
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argument
would be understandable which means if bees disappear, the number of pests which destroy crops
skyrockets
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.
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proccess
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process
may lead to fundamental
crops
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shortage
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in the long term.
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, since
everythings
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everything
in
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nature, like
algeas
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algae
,
animals
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,
plants
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,
humans
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and humans
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links
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in
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each other there could be
dramatic
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the dramatic
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harmful
impact
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on us which we can not determine with our current experiment and understanding. The
propenents
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proponents
of
belief
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the belief
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that we have more essential troubles argue that with our modern
technologies
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technologies,
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we are able to solve
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this problems
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this problem
these problems
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.
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, if a bacteria
disappear
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disappears
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, we can cover the harmful results of
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vanishing as long as we define the function of that bacteria.
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, there are more
threating
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threatening
threats
and wide-ranging
enviromental
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environmental
problems
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as climate change,
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water
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and water
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shortage
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. Taking
water
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shortage
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, unless prevent huge amounts of unnecessary
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usage, we will face a
water
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shortage
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.
Considering the
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water
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as
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is
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a fundamental liquid for the whole life forms and there is no chance
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of surviving
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any life form in the world without
the
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water
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. So
that
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making an effort to protect our
water
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resources seems more essential to us. Turning to
the
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climate change, which has
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a broaden
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broaden
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impact on our
lifes
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lives
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. One of the numerous detrimental effects of
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rising sea levels which may result in a disappearing
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shoreline and
loss
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of huge parts of lands. In conclusion,
while
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loss
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the loss
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of particular species of
plants
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and
animals
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has bad effects on us, I firmly believe that we have more crucial troubles.
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the sustainability of our world,it is important to make a list
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emergency levels of
concerns
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concern
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