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some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that they are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these bills and give your own opinion.

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The issue of
loss
 of particular species of
plants
 and
animals
 has been becoming more popular these days through the risen interest of media
such
 as TV, news,
journals
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.
While
 some people believe that
this
 is the most essential issue in our world,
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others argue that there are several more crucial troubles including global warming,
water
shortage
 or weather
unpredictibility
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unpredictability
. I, personally, believe in the latter belief, in
this
 essay I will argue
the
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both sides and explain
why
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my perspective. People
who
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state that the
loss
 of particular
kind
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kinds
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 of
animals
 and
plants
 has
devastating
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a devastating
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 effect on the earth. Considering the interconnectedness of nature
this
arguement
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argument
 would be understandable which means if bees disappear, the number of pests which destroy crops
skyrockets
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.
This
proccess
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process
 may lead to fundamental
crops
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shortage
 in the long term.
Furthermore
, since
everythings
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everything
 in
the
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nature, like
algeas
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algae
,
animals
,
plants
,
humans
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and humans
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links
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in
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with
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 each other there could be
dramatic
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the dramatic
a dramatic
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 harmful
impact
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impacts
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 on us which we can not determine with our current experiment and understanding. The
propenents
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proponents
 of
belief
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the belief
a belief
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 that we have more essential troubles argue that with our modern
technologies
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technologies,
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 we are able to solve
this problems
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this problem
these problems
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.
For instance
, if a bacteria
disappear
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disappears
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, we can cover the harmful results of
this
 vanishing as long as we define the function of that bacteria.
Additionally
, there are more
threating
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threatening
threats
 and wide-ranging
enviromental
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environmental
 problems
such
 as climate change,
water
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and water
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shortage
. Taking
water
shortage
, unless prevent huge amounts of unnecessary
water
 usage, we will face a
water
shortage
.
Considering the
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water
as
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is
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 a fundamental liquid for the whole life forms and there is no chance
to survive
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of surviving
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 any life form in the world without
the
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water
. So
that
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making an effort to protect our
water
 resources seems more essential to us. Turning to
the
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climate change, which has
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a broaden
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broaden
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 impact on our
lifes
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lives
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. One of the numerous detrimental effects of
that is
 rising sea levels which may result in a disappearing
in
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shoreline and
loss
 of huge parts of lands. In conclusion,
while
loss
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the loss
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 of particular species of
plants
 and
animals
 has bad effects on us, I firmly believe that we have more crucial troubles.
Ensuring
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To ensure
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 the sustainability of our world,it is important to make a list
according to
 emergency levels of
concerns
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concern
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.
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