some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that they are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these bills and give your own opinion.

The issue of

loss

of particular species of

plants

and

animals

has been becoming more popular these days through the risen interest of media

such

as TV, news,

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.

While

some people believe that

this

is the most essential issue in our world,

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others argue that there are several more crucial troubles including global warming,

water

shortage

or weather

unpredictibility

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unpredictability

. I, personally, believe in the latter belief, in

this

essay I will argue

the

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both sides and explain

why

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my perspective. People

who

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state that the

loss

of particular

kind

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kinds

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of

animals

and

plants

has

devastating

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a devastating

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effect on the earth. Considering the interconnectedness of nature

this

arguement

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argument

would be understandable which means if bees disappear, the number of pests which destroy crops

skyrockets

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.

This

proccess

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process

may lead to fundamental

crops

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shortage

in the long term.

Furthermore

, since

everythings

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everything

in

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nature, like

algeas

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algae

,

animals

,

plants

,

humans

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links

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in

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each other there could be

dramatic

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the dramatic

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harmful

impact

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impacts

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on us which we can not determine with our current experiment and understanding. The

propenents

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proponents

of

belief

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the belief

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that we have more essential troubles argue that with our modern

technologies

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technologies,

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we are able to solve

this problems

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this problem

these problems

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.

For instance

, if a bacteria

disappear

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, we can cover the harmful results of

this

vanishing as long as we define the function of that bacteria.

Additionally

, there are more

threating

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threatening

threats

and wide-ranging

enviromental

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environmental

problems

such

as climate change,

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shortage

. Taking

water

shortage

, unless prevent huge amounts of unnecessary

water

usage, we will face a

water

shortage

.

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water

as

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a fundamental liquid for the whole life forms and there is no chance

to survive

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of surviving

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any life form in the world without

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water

. So

that

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making an effort to protect our

water

resources seems more essential to us. Turning to

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climate change, which has

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broaden

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impact on our

lifes

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lives

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. One of the numerous detrimental effects of

that is

rising sea levels which may result in a disappearing

in

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shoreline and

loss

of huge parts of lands. In conclusion,

while

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the loss

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of particular species of

plants

and

animals

has bad effects on us, I firmly believe that we have more crucial troubles.

Ensuring

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the sustainability of our world,it is important to make a list

according to

emergency levels of

concerns

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concern

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.