You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match.

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Dear Harsh, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to wish you a speedy recovery and get well soon.

Last

week was a difficult time for all of us as you were met with an accident and injured for an upcoming important match. You were not an amazing bowler but

also

one

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and only wicket-keeper for our

Cricet

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Cricket

team

Due to

your accident, it was crucial to find your replacement.

Initially

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we felt that

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were

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not able to play semi-finals against

Team

Blue, but somehow we managed to arrange your replacement. We request Mehul to play on behalf of you, and he did an outstanding bawling in the

last

match. Here, I would like you to share some highlights of the match. On the match day,

Team

blue

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won the toss, and they chose to bawl first. Our

Team

Red scored 250 runs in 20 overs, which was an excellent performance by our

team

Then

, in

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the next

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half,

Team

blue

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started their batting with a bang and we were not able to take a single wicket within 7 overs.

Then

, Mehul came for bawling and he took

back to back

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3 wickets and we won the match.

Lastly

, I would like

you

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to wish a good health and we want to see you back on

field

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very soon. Take care. Regards, Urvashi

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

227 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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