These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Do advantages of working at home outweigh diadvantages?

In
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the modern
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ear
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, technology rises day by day. Nowadays people totally depend on digital
system
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for their
work
. As compare to
past
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now people use
electonics
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electronics
robots for their jobs because they are more
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convenient
as
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compare
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to
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work
at
office
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. so there are distinct
benfits
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benefits
and drawbacks
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above
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statement. To commence with, using laptops and computers at
home
for occupation is more beneficial as it saves
time
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office
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the office
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.
For instance
, To do
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job they have to travel which
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lots of
time
whereas
doing
work
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they do not need to go outside.
Furthermore
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time
with family, From
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from
home
a person can make more strong with family
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members
member
as they enjoy each and every activity with their family member rather than getting
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collapsar
with other employees.
Best
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example of
this
is a person can eat on
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some quality
time
on
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with their loved ones.
On the other hand
,
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and foremost drawback is
work
environment is like
office
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at
home
.
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of
home
distirbance
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disturbance
distract
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the person from his
work
. They did not get
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environment so they
donot
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do not
concentrate or focus at
work
. In conclusion ,
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benefits
benfits
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benefits
are more rather than
drwbacks
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drawbacks
so
I
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my point of view
job
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from
home
is more beneficial than
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