The chart below shows the average money spent per costumer on various types of equipment in a Canadian sports store
The line chart below displays the amount a customer spends to purchase different tools in a
Canada
sports store.The unit is measured in dollars.Replace the word
Canadian
Overall
,it is evident that there was a downward trend in Tennis and Rugby
and an upward slope for football
and swimming.
To begin
with,In 2000,the highest rate stood at 60 for football
, while
swimming was the least
.Correct word choice
lowest
Also
, They both witnessed a rapid increase over the years and was
at 70 and 30 with Correct subject-verb agreement
were
football
at the peak by 2020.
Finally
,The figure of
Change preposition
for
rugby
and tennis was 40 and 30 respectively. Furthermore
,There was a similar pattern as the value of rugby
made an intersection with football
at 50 in 2005 and there was a clash between tennis and swimming in 2010 at 20. However
,Rugby
saw a sharp fall to 10 hitting the bottom of the graph at the end
of the period and Rugby
reduced dramatically to 30,the same value as swimming by 2020.Submitted by bumzyakins on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rugby, football with synonyms.
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