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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below displays the number of people living in
India
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 and China in the year 2000, with a forecasted prediction till 2050.The unit is measured in Billions.
Overall
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,it is evident from the chart that there was an upward trend in both countries over the years.
To begin
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 with, In 2000,
India
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 and China stood at 1.0 and 1.1 respectively.
Although
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India
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 was at the bottom of the chart
initially
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, it increased rapidly to 1.4,
while
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 the other country's population rose significantly from 1.25 being the highest in the year to 1.45 between 2020 and 2030. Afterwards,there was an equivalent figure, as there was an intersection at 1.45 in both nations by 2030.
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,in the following years,a gradual dip to 1.4 in
china
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China
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,and a sudden surge to 1.6 in
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india
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India
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, hitting the peak of the graph, is predicted to occur by 2050.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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