the maps show the town of stokeford in 1930 and 2010. write a reposrt of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevan

the maps show the town of stokeford in 1930 and 2010. write a reposrt of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevan
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the structural developments and the transformation of a suburb called
stokeford
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Stokeford
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between 1930 and 2010. As seen, the plan reveal that the
stockeford
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stocked
Rockford
center in 1930 had a small number of residence and enlarged farmland but had rapid development of building after that. As is observed,
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the stockeford
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stockeford
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stocked
suburb is located at the east of the River Stoke.
Side
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with the river, the main road has connected the bridge on the North East
side
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of the centre in both designs. In 1930 a few buildings on both sides of the road, two shops, and a post office were presented on the west
side
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of the road. Aside from that, an elementary school, a sizeable garden, and a connecting subway to the bridge were on the east of the suburb. In 2010, two big farmlands that were quite visible in the 1930 maps disappeared. The 2010 map shows that the post office, the bridge, and the primary school remained unchanged,
however
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, the school building became bigger. The shops disappeared and the park with trees was compromised to build more accommodation facilities. The big house was converted to old people’s homes with some additions to its structure.
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, the number of buildings increased remarkably and these buildings were built on the formerly existing cultivated land and yard.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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