You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time -say what action you would like to take

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Dear Sarah, Hope you are well. I am writing

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email to notify you that I need to stop my evening course from next

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my personal situation. I will explain the details of the situation and share my plan in the following paragraphs. I got confirmed by blood testing in the hospital that I am pregnant. As you know I am a full-time employee in a fund management firm, and

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I think that I will be overloaded in terms of the pregnancy period if I still continue my evening study.

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, I would like to pause my part-time evening study until the end of next

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is just my temporary action, and I will pick up the evening course after I finish giving birth to the baby next

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. I believe that the beginning of December next

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is a good time for me to restart the course since my baby will turn to three-month-old. Thanks for your help

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I studied in our evening school. I hope that you can understand my decision and see you when I come back next

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. Thanks, and Regards Jade

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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