Now-a-days modern modes of transport are available, still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?
It is
admitedly
true that Correct your spelling
admittedly
transport
system day by day improving and it is play
a vital role for Change the verb form
plays
people
daily livelyhood
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
livelihood
i
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I
complitely
disagree to Correct your spelling
completely
useing
Correct your spelling
using
bicycle
as a
best way to get from one Change the article
the
place
to another place
. In this
essay, i
will discuss about modern Change the capitalization
I
transport
system and why bicycle
is not Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
best
way to Add an article
the best
travel
one
Change preposition
from one
place
to another place
.
In this
mordern
Correct your spelling
modern
time
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time,
people
are too much
Correct quantifier usage
apply
concern
about Replace the word
concerned
time
because time
equal
money but Replace the word
equals
bicycle
is not Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
convinian
for long Correct your spelling
convenient
dictence
Correct your spelling
distance
travel
. It is kind of hard for bicycle
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a bicycle
such
as if some one
Correct your spelling
someone
want
to Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
travel
30KM distence
by Correct your spelling
distance
bicycle
which is time consuming
and it is loss Add a hyphen
time-consuming
enargy
. Correct your spelling
energy
As a result
, people
can not fouce
Correct your spelling
focus
there
work. Correct your spelling
their
bicycle
is good for short distence
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distance
travel
such
as 2KM to 4KM and also
cycling help
Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
to
human health Change preposition
apply
beacuse
it is Correct your spelling
because
a
best Change the article
the
exarcise
. Correct your spelling
exercise
bicyale
Correct your spelling
bicycle
bicycles
as
a long Correct your spelling
is
distence
Correct your spelling
distance
traveling
Change the spelling
travelling
weast
of Correct your spelling
waste
time
.
On the other side,In recent time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
individual
can not Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
weast theire
Correct your spelling
waste their
time
to traveling
or Change the spelling
travelling
comute
for long Correct your spelling
commute
dictence
. For that Correct your spelling
distance
distances
reson
they Correct your spelling
reason
are
use modern Unnecessary verb
apply
transport
system
Change the noun form
systems
such
as bus
,Fix the agreement mistake
buses
car
,Fix the agreement mistake
cars
air plain
,Correct your spelling
aeroplanes
rawil
way and metro Correct your spelling
rail
raw
rawil
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rail
so
on. I firmly agree with them because if we Correct word choice
and so
are use
modern Change the verb form
use
transport
then
we are not only save
our Change the verb form
are not only saving
time
but also
enargy
Correct your spelling
energy
wich
is significant for work and study. Correct your spelling
which
As a result
, emplyee
can Correct your spelling
employee
employees
time
to time
arived
there office and home.
Correct your spelling
arrived
To sum up
, Transport
are play
Wrong verb form
plays
vital
role in our lives. in my opinion,Correct article usage
a vital
bicycle
is good for Add an article
the bicycle
a bicycle
that
kind of Correct determiner usage
the
people
who are
want to do Unnecessary verb
apply
exarcise
or want to go short Correct your spelling
exercise
distence
. Correct your spelling
distance
distances
bicycle
is save
Wrong verb form
saves
peole
Correct your spelling
people
mony
which is good but Correct your spelling
money
long
Change preposition
for long
disctence
Correct your spelling
distance
journy
Correct your spelling
journeys
people
are prefer
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prefer
transport
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