Now-a-days modern modes of transport are available, still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?

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admittedly
true that
transport
system day by day improving and it
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a vital role for
people
daily
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livelihood
. In my opinion,
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complitely
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completely
disagree to
useing
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using
bicycle
as
a
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the
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best way to get from one
place
to another
place
. In
this
essay,
i
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will discuss about modern
transport
system and why
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
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is not
best
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the best
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way to
travel
one
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from one
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place
to another
place
. In
this
mordern
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modern
time
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people
are too
much
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apply
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concern
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about
time
because
time
equal
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money but
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
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is not
convinian
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convenient
for long
dictence
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distance
travel
. It is kind of hard for
bicycle
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a bicycle
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such
as if
some one
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someone
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want
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wants
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to
travel
30KM
distence
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distance
by
bicycle
which is
time consuming
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and it is loss
enargy
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energy
.
As a result
,
people
can not
fouce
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focus
there
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their
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work.
bicycle
is good for short
distence
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distance
travel
such
as 2KM to 4KM and
also
cycling
help
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helps
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to
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human health
beacuse
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because
it is
a
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the
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best
exarcise
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exercise
.
bicyale
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bicycle
bicycles
as
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is
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a long
distence
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distance
traveling
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travelling
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weast
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waste
of
time
. On the other side,In recent
time
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times
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individual
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individuals
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can not
weast theire
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waste their
time
to
traveling
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travelling
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or
comute
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commute
for long
dictence
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distance
distances
. For that
reson
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reason
they
are
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use modern
transport
system
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systems
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such
as
bus
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buses
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,
car
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cars
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,
air plain
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aeroplanes
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,
rawil
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rail
raw
way and metro
rawil
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rail
so
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and so
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on. I firmly agree with them because if we
are use
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use
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modern
transport
then
we
are not only save
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are not only saving
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our
time
but
also
enargy
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energy
wich
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which
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is significant for work and study.
As a result
,
emplyee
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employee
employees
can
time
to
time
arived
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arrived
there office and home.
To sum up
,
Transport
are play
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plays
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vital
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a vital
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role in our lives. in my opinion,
bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
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is good for
that
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the
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kind of
people
who
are
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apply
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want to do
exarcise
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exercise
or want to go short
distence
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distance
distances
.
bicycle
is save
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saves
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peole
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people
mony
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money
which is good but
long
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for long
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disctence
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distance
journy
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journeys
people
are prefer
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prefer
show examples
transport
.
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