you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Esteemed Sir, I, Meena Gupta: a resident of

Toronto

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, am writing

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letter to express my concern about an article published on Wednesday regarding the

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appearance of town centres across Canada. I agree that all the town centres are equipped with the influx of visitors and have enormous shopping and eating stores;

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, it does not mean that they all have the same infrastructure.

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Toronto

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's downtown is renowned for its historical buildings, especially the CN Tower which makes it unrivalled. No city in Canada has skyscrapers like

Toronto

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has; all of them are unique in their own way. I would like to invite you to explore

Toronto

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downtown, especially on Weekends. You can take a direct flight from Calgary to

Toronto

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Toronto

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has excellent public transport, you can install a local bus application for

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guidance. I hope you will not take my opinion personally. I just want you to explore and learn more about my place of residence. Thanking you. Yours faithfully Meena Gupta

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing in response to
the article published in your newspaper
I would like to express my disagreement with
the claim made in the article that
I agree with some points raised in the article
However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
One notable difference is
Another way in which my town center stands out is
Furthermore,
In addition to
I would be more than happy to offer
a guided tour of my town
to the writer of the article

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