In today's world, some people argue that decreasing the risk of environmental problems and protecting our Earth are politicians' responsibilities. In my perspective, concerning this statement, while it seems to be reasonable to some extent I hold a belief that there are several aspects worth being considered.

One advantage of
politicians
' ability to handle
problems
is their logical thinking and an extensive relationship. To explain,
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politicians
who have experience,
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can build a
plan
to solve
problems
by
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methods and use their relationship to call for support from scientists and non-governmental organizations as well.
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, to
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problems
effectively, the
politicians
may create a meeting or rally to publish their
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plan
and action
plan
.
Therefore
, it is beneficial for the community to have the
politicians
' responsibilities to reduce global environmental damage.
However
, I would argue that there are several benefits of individuals
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this
protecting our environment progress is their unity. To be more precise, for big
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problems
, it is
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for our society to have not unity of individuals to handling
environment
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problems
. In detail, by responding, they can create a big wave to gain goals of environment protection fast
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the short-term. Another reason supporting my view is financial contribution. As we
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, an extensive
plan
must need good financial sources
such
as operating
cost
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, so people can contribute a lot of money
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these plans.
For instance
, they can donate some money to operate a factory that produces organic products.
As a result
, individuals
also
play a significant role in reducing global environmental damage. In conclusion,
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my perspective, I mostly disagree that decreasing the risk of environmental
problems
and protecting our Earth are
politicians
' responsibilities
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