In today's world, some people argue that decreasing the risk of environmental problems and protecting our Earth are politicians' responsibilities. In my perspective, concerning this statement, while it seems to be reasonable to some extent I hold a belief that there are several aspects worth being considered.

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' ability to handle
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is their logical thinking and an extensive relationship. To explain,
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politicians
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who have experience,
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can build a
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methods and use their relationship to call for support from scientists and non-governmental organizations as well.
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effectively, the
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may create a meeting or rally to publish their
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and action
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, it is beneficial for the community to have the
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' responsibilities to reduce global environmental damage.
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, I would argue that there are several benefits of individuals
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protecting our environment progress is their unity. To be more precise, for big
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, it is
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for our society to have not unity of individuals to handling
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problems
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. In detail, by responding, they can create a big wave to gain goals of environment protection fast
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the short-term. Another reason supporting my view is financial contribution. As we
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, an extensive
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must need good financial sources
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, so people can contribute a lot of money
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these plans.
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, they can donate some money to operate a factory that produces organic products.
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, individuals
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play a significant role in reducing global environmental damage. In conclusion,
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my perspective, I mostly disagree that decreasing the risk of environmental
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and protecting our Earth are
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' responsibilities
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