In today's world, some people argue that decreasing the risk of environmental problems and protecting our Earth are politicians' responsibilities. In my perspective, concerning this statement, while it seems to be reasonable to some extent I hold a belief that there are several aspects worth being considered.
One advantage of
politicians
' ability to handle problems
is their logical thinking and an extensive relationship. To explain, for
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politicians
who have experience, they
can build a Correct pronoun usage
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plan
to solve problems
by sciential
methods and use their relationship to call for support from scientists and non-governmental organizations as well. Correct your spelling
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For instance
, to solving
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problems
effectively, the politicians
may create a meeting or rally to publish their detail
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plan
and action plan
. Therefore
, it is beneficial for the community to have the politicians
' responsibilities to reduce global environmental damage.
However
, I would argue that there are several benefits of individuals join
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this
protecting our environment progress is their unity. To be more precise, for big society
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problems
, it is drawback
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a drawback
environment
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environmental
problems
. In detail, by responding, they can create a big wave to gain goals of environment protection fast with
the short-term.
Another reason supporting my view is financial contribution. As we Change preposition
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plan
must need good financial sources such
as operating cost
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for
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For instance
, they can donate some money to operate a factory that produces organic products. As a result
, individuals also
play a significant role in reducing global environmental damage.
In conclusion, in
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and protecting our Earth are politicians
' responsibilitiesSubmitted by yeshomeclass on
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