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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given image depicts a bar chart representing the trends in the drinking habits of
coffee
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 and tea in Australia. As can be seen from the graph, there are five types of cities involved in
this
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 trend namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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 and Hobart. The majority of
people
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 drink
coffee
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 in Sydney.
Likewise
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, a higher amount of
people
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 went to cafes for both varieties in Melbourne. it was reduced little by in Hobart.
On the other hand
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, in
Adelaide
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, equal amounts of the community consumed instant
coffee
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 and tea by using direct or takeaway methods in the
last
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 4 weeks nearly 50%.
Moreover
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, the minority of
people
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 bought fresh
coffee
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 in Brisbane and
Adelaide
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 at almost 45%
then
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 it increased by 5% in Hobart.
According to
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 the graph, more
people
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 have preferred to consume
coffee
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 or tea directly in a cafe in the
last
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 4 weeks.
Whereas
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,
Adelaide
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's
people
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 only bought instant
coffee
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 more than went to a
coffee
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, adelaide, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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